Cretaive writing

This week We have been doing some creative writing in English. Here is a piece of my writing. I hope that is good because I thought I put in a lot of hard work/Thinking to make it better than I usually do.

It was 5 years ago. I created a shake. My siblings and I were brought up in a wooden Hut in Hawaii. I built up a reputation for the Birdman, I was known for being one with nature so I built a beautiful hut by the mountains and the flowy river. I could hear the birds chirp every morning, the view was breathtaking, The noise was tranquil, Flowing rivers and birds everything. There was nothing in the world that could replace this. In my spare time, I would find green stone to carve. It was so majestic the land was natural. It was like a view or a scene in a movie. You don't think it is real until you visit. I tried to invite my friends but they think it is “old, tedious and scary ” But they are city people so I get it. I didn't choose nature life, nature life chose me.