Kiwi Can

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Today we watched a tape about chuck the chicken from kiwi can. The object of the game is to run around the circle as fast as you can and if you| don't make it back to your spot before the other team lines up in a straight line you are out, if you do make it you get a point.

When the game started they got into two squads one hooking the cow  one throwing  the first thrower was Sam.T when he throw the cow he made it dashed back and got a point for his team. Then they celebrated but not ear preaching they celebrated in a low voice. Then they passed the cow around the circle then Nathan said chuck the chicken Adelaide got up and chucked the chicken he snapped around the circle and swooped into his spot.

Lucky Sam.M was not in the line so he got a point, “ yay”. Then they made up a new rule. The new rule was when you chuck the chicken you had to do under over when you catch the ball so the cow went around and it stopped on niesha and she was like supersonic speed. She made it. Then it got to christian  when he trouth the cow the whole team was like a speeding ball .  they made it back to there spot then they switched teams.

The first thrower was Junior he made it back to his spot and got their first point. Then They past the cow it stopped on lukas and he throw the cow out the window he was like supersonic  and he got a home run he lucky he back to his spot because the other team was very rapidly fast you could not even see them.

I wish I can play chuck the chicken that was a cow that made a pig noise  in class because it will help me persist more wherever  I am and it will help me in my life